The Story (Chapter 1, The Beginning)

Zack the treeko was swinging through the trees with the wind sweeping into him.
It was very windy and it looked like a storm was brewing.
"Big brother!" Sean the ralts called. "We should go back."
"I'm just going to explore a little more!" Treeko called back. "You go back!"
"No!" Said Sean stubbornly. "I'm coming too!"
"Ok" Zack said reluctantly as he dropped down behind ralts from the tree.
They walked together in the sandy beach talking about what they were going to do for spring break.
When the first few drops of rain fell, they spotted some rustling in the bush ahead.
They went up to the bush and all of a sudden the rustling stopped.
The things were completely still and one was whimpering slightly.
They opened the bush and two dirty and very thin pokemon, were huddling in the bush.

'Sphe-' said the seal.
'Tra-' said the antlion.
The looked majorly beaten up.
The antlion got up and started walking.
'Got-to get-HOME!' yelled the antlion as he fell over.
The seal was rolling in the dirt, sadly mumbling.
(Dramatic eh?)

The brothers looked at them in shock.
They nodded and they both knew what to do.
Ralts used the little bait of psychic ability he had to drag the little seal across the ground while treeko swung through the trees with trapinch on his back.
They were both out.
The seal seemed to be waking up but the trapinch was being hurt by the rain.
Treeko took him under some leaves.
The brothers took the poor hungry pokemon to their father.
Dave the grovyle was the brother's father and he did a good job of taking care of them.
When he found the two pokemon, he called for a doctor and he took them away to the hospital.
They kept murmuring.
The seal was awake now and was saying.
"Tribe! Lost! Horrible! Trapinch! Friend!"
He was in bad condition and the brothers came to see them everyday.
Finally, on the eighth day of checking in on them, he got an answer out of the trapinch of who he was, and where he came from.
He said .......

'An abondoned tower! Collapsing! Help! No help came! Flood! Washed away! weakened.' said Trapinch.
'Oh! Sheesh!' said Treecko.
Spheal was having trouble surviving without her herd.
Trapinch was short on words. He was always hissing.
Spheal felt saddenned that all this had happenned.

(Treeko's name is zack btw.)
"So you're saying," Sean said. "That you got hurt in an abandoned tower and you almost died and you met up with spheal and you had already been friends?"
"Yes!" Trapinch said. "Bad men with r on chest always chasing me and spheal."
"These guys are really causing you that much trouble, eh?" Zack asked. "We'll take 'em out. We'll start when you're feeling better."
But they didn't have to wait, that night, team rocket snuck into the city and started catching some pokemon.
The whole city started fighting for their lives.
Sean and Dave started running and called for Zack to do the same.
"NO!!" Zack yelled! "Gotta go get my new friends!"
And he ran to the hospital as Dave and Sean hid in the huge forest.
(I have to go to bed. See you tomorrow.)

(OK, bye)
'Trapinch was passed out again, but Spheal was awake.
'Spheal, we need your help. Those guys are attacking the city!' Zack yelled.
'I will help then, is Trapinch OK?' asked Spheal.
'Yeah, he's asleep.' answered Zack.
They ran off.
(This is where fun begins!)

Treeko grabbed trapinch over his shoulder.
They started making a break for it when they almost ran into a team rocket grunt.
"Heh heh." He smirked. "Where do you think you're going?"
Spheal answered with a blast of ice shards to his face.
"Agh!" He yelled. "Thats it, go weezing!"
A huge purple cloud with 2 heads popped out of the pokeball.
"WEEZING!" It bellowed as it blasted them with a foul gas.
They all started coughing and trapinch woke up.
Weezing then blasted them with drops of poison.
Acid!
They were all hurt.
The team rocket grunt pulled out 3 empty pokeballs and right when he was about to throw them, he clutched his head in pain.
Weezing started to do the same thing until it fainted.
Then, Sean came in surrounded by a white light and smashed into the team rocket grunt with all his might and at that exact moment, he turned into a different shape.
Sean had evolved.
A kirlia!

Trapinch was surprised at the transformation. He had never encountered evolution before.
Trapinch helped by running up to the Grunt and using Crunch on he's left leg.
'OW! THAT HURT!' asaid the grunt as he held he's now broken leg and winced in pain.
'Your turn Sean!' said Trapinch.

Zack was looking at Sean.
"You finally evolved." Zack said.
"Yep!" Sean said. "It feels great!"
And Zack, looking proud of his brother, tied the rocket grunt up with his vines.
Then, they dashed for cover.

The Rocket Grunt hit the ground hard.
Then, Kirlis used Psychic and started banging him into a wall.
As he was about to do it a 5th time, Spheal used a fully charged Aurora Beam on the grunt.
He was smashed into the aack wall, and fell unconscious.
Then, Spheal started to glow.
(He is not evolving).

Spheal charged up and started glowing.
And she blew out of her mouth a huge ice beam.
The grunt's bonds were snapped but he fell unconscious.
"Lets go!" Trapinch said from the next room. And the two, Sean and spheal, followed.
They jumped out into the dead of night and hopped into the forest.
What they saw was bad.
A person who looked like he had much higher authority then the grunt was attacking Dave.
"NO!!" Sean yelled. "DAD.."
Treeko had clamped his hand over Sean's mouth.
He saw they were in no shape to battle and that person's badge read admin.
The leader of this whole operation was upon their father.
And there was nothing they could do about it!
They watched their father get caught and stuffed into a backpack.
Spheal and trapinch started to cry for the brothers loss.
Sean started to sniffle too but he was more mature then when he was a ralts.
Treeko just looked down, enraged and wanting revenge.
It took every ounce of self control he had not to smash into that admin.
He would be caught as well.
As the 4 friends stood in the trees, they realized that a quest was about to start.
A quest to get their dad back!

They noticed that 7 Grunts were trying to catch them.
Spheal got angry at what they had done to her new friends.
'RRAWWRR!!!!!!!!!' yelled Spheal as she charged up a rollout.
She was zooming everywhere knocking over grunts and then runing them over.
Trapinch wanted to be there too, he was using Sand Tomb on all the grunts.
They all went under.
As Spheal and Trapinch fell over from exhaustion, the 12 other grunts running up to them were suddenly frozen.
'Sno!' something yelled.
All the snow from the nearby mountaintops was falling onto the grunts!
Then the Avalanche stopped.
There was no ice type pokemon besides Spheal in sight.

They knew they had little time before they got up so they dashed in the direction of the mountains.
They knew someone was helping them from up there and they wanted to figure out who it was.
So Zack, Sean, trapinch and spheal set off to the northern mountains just as the sun began to rise.
Zack knew they would have to get much stronger to beat the admin who had taken his dad.
He remembered how strong that evil mightiana (sorry, I dunno how to spell it) was and that kept him trudging on.
They trudged for days until they found a little hut.
They all collapsed in front of it so hungry and a girl came out.
"Mommy!" The girl said. "There are some poor pokemon here. They look hungry."
And that's the last thing they remembered before they all passed out.

(Something bugs me about your pet. It looks like it cuts off the scarf in one or two frames.)
They woke up.
Trapinch did not.
Trapinch was out to the world, and he's heart was slowing.
Spheal was crying over him.
'Please don't die!' she yelled.
Zack and Sean felt sad for Spheal.

(I noticed that too. I cut the canvas size so maybe when I did, I accidentally clipped off a bit of it.)
Trapinch was writhing and as the pokemon were all gathered around, the girl came in.
"Oh!" She said "You're awake!"
She served them milk and cookies.
All the pokemon looked grateful and just as they started to enjoy themselves, they remembered their friend.
"He's poisoned," she said. "The antidote is quite easy to find though. There is an apple tree at the top of the mountain and it has the healing powers you need."
Zack hopped up.
He let out a series of noises to the human but to the pokemon, he said "we have to go now!"
"Let me pack you some food and you can be on your way." She said.
The girl's mom and the girl were happy to pack a big supply of food.
Sean smiled in gratitude and the girl smiled back.
And they set off with enough food for a week.
They left trapinch at the girl's house.

While they were gone, Trapinch's heart was slowing even faster.
'Wait a second...!' said the girl as she ran out of the house to ask an online Professor, Prof. Ussu.
The Professor was coming to check it out.
'It will take a few days' she said.
Meanwhile, Trapinch was sufferring badly, he's skin had started peeling off of he's back!

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(You're becoming a little bit of a dark sonic SUDK. Not putting much in each post.)
The quest had started and they had already ran into some trouble.
A graveller mother and father and their 2 geodude children had been stepped on by spheal.
They had sprung into action using rock tomb on sean and burying him.
"No! Sean!" Zack said and shot an absorb projectile into the graveller.
He fainted and Zack regained all his health.
The rest of the family picked up the graveller and ran.
"That was just the beginning and we're already fighting!" Sean complained. "I wish we could meet this pokemon who saved our lives."
"Me too Sean," Zack said. "Lets keep moving."
Little did they know that they would soon meet their saviour and he was watching them from the cliff top that very second!

Spheal was following Zack and Sean confidently.
She wanted to save her childhood friend more than anything.
'Who keeps helping us?' asked Sean.
That struck something to Spheal. She didn't realise.
'That's a good question!' answered Spheal.
She had totally forgotten about Trapinch for a while, she had other things on her mind.
Suddenly, she felt a chill.
'Um...did you guys feel that?' asked Spheal.
'Kind of,' answered Zack.
'Me too,' answered Sean.
A cold and damp smell was coming towards them.
They seen a Corsola ahead of them.
Behind the Corsola was an Octillery.
'What are they doing on a mountain?' asked Spheal.
The Corsola was damaged and the Octillery was chasing after it.
In the distance, it was very windy. VERY windy.

(It was good of you to edit that post. Now you're not a lazy writer. )
"Well, lets go" Zack said.
"Are you insane?" Cried Sean. "We'll freeze out there!"
"You all saw that corsolla being chased." Zack said. "Now I'm not positive that octillery is evil but it's a good guess so don't let it fool you into thinking it's good. Now who's with me. Are we going to save that pokemon or not?!"
"I'm in." Spheal said. "It's not like we're delaying the mission. That's the way we need to go."
"Oh yeah, you're right." Sean said. "Ok, I'm in."
So they all plunged into the freezing cold the only one feeling good about it being spheal.
"There they are." Sean exclaimed and they saw he was right.
Treeko used bullet seed, a move he had learned from a tm he found on the octillery allowing the corsolla to escape.
The octillery turned around angrilly.
It looked ready for battle.

Spheal used a fully charged Aurora Beam on the Octillery, and got it in th snout.
Octillery turned around and started breathing heavily through he's snout.
Octillery used Octozooka on the group, they all got hit.
Spheal started sliding down the hill.
'Time for my special move!' 'AVALANCHE!' someone yelled.
The avalanche narrowly missed the group, but hit the Octillery.
The Corsola was nowhere in sight.
'Who used avalanche?' asked Sean.
'I don't know it, so it couldn't have been me.' replied Spheal.
'And I'm a Grass Type.' said Zack.
Meanwhile, back at the hut, Trapinch's back was peeling away to reveal two wing-like appendiges.

(Hasn't been updated in a while.)
The group found an apple on a very high tree.
But, the tree was above a cave.
'That cave doesn't sit right with me.' said Spheal.
They walked up to the cave entrance, and tried jumping up.
Then, they heard a certain noise.
'SNOOOOOOOO-!' they heard, in a deep booming voice.
'That's not the same noise as the thing that was helping us.' said Zack.
A large rock covered in snow suddenly stood up.
'Abomasnow!' screamed Spheal.
Back at the hut, Trapinch's skin was turning pale pink, and his head was opening, to reveal two long, yellow antennae.

Zack jumped up.
The abomasnow merely batted him away.
He climbed out of a bush.
Spheal decided to take action.
He started to roll, slowly at first but rapidly going faster.
"Sean! Distract him!" He was really spinning fast now, snow was flying everywhere.
Sean used confusion and he started hitting himself on the head.
It should only work for a second! "Sean called.
Snow was blasting in every direction.
"Ahhh!" Spheal heard a smash and Sean went flying past him.
"No!" Spheal screamed! He was spinning so fast, he couldn't stop rolling a bit forward, he had to wait for the perfect moment.
He saw the abomasnow's shadow through the snow.
It's now or never. He thought as he got ready.
As soon as he got a clear view of him he released.
He smashed into him with all his might, the abomasnow fell to the ground and spheal collapsed.
He felt a rumble.
He looked around, he didn't see anything.
And that was when he looked at abomasnow, rising slowly, dazed but not hurt.
He walked over to spheal with a look of pure rage.
Spheal knew, that he, was in huge trouble.

'Fu-Fu-Furi!' they suddenly heard.
Suddenly, Abomasnow was stabbed through the hand by a large shard of Ice.
It looked behind itself to see a Furiijio.
(Just to try to get started again.)